Deep Throat

Author: Jane Bennett Munro
Genre: Mystery
Series: #1 in Toni Day medical mystery series
Type: Paperback
Source: directly from author
Publisher: iUniverse
First Published: 2011
First Line: “There was a dead body in my office.”

Note: My sincere thanks to author Jane Bennett Munro for providing me with a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.

Book Description:  Dr. Antoinette Day- a young, successful pathologist known to her friends and colleagues as Toni-has no idea what awaits her when Dr. Sally Shore arrives at Perrine Memorial Hospital in Twin Falls, Idaho, to fill in for a colleague recovering from a heart attack. Toni’s life is about to become a living hell. Dr. Shore is supposed to see patients, perform surgeries, and take turns covering the emergency room until the regular surgeon recovers from his quadruple bypass. But unfortunately, she uses her temporary opportunity to discredit Toni and tarnish her reputation with her medical colleagues. When the visiting surgeon is conveniently murdered- her lifeless body found in Toni’s office-Toni is the obvious suspect. But Toni is not going down without a fight. Forced to solve the murder in order to save her future, Toni’s life becomes even more complicated when her ex-boyfriend starts stalking her and threatening her husband.

In this riveting murder mystery, a stubborn pathologist must rely on more than just her microscope as she delves into a complicated murder mystery, soon discovering that it is not just her freedom at stake-but her life

My Thoughts:  Medical mystery is a genre that I really haven’t read.  But one of the things that drew me to review this book was the fact that the author had a successful 33 year career as a forensic pathologist.  To me, this means that she could back up all the medical terms, storylines and the inner workings of a hospital with her real-life experience.  This experience gives the book a sense of authenticity to Toni’s role as a pathologist.

But one of the downfalls of having a professional medical specialist write a mystery is that sometimes the medical jargon gets a little heavy and that’s what, in my opinion, happened here at times.  I was left wondering in a few spots if the unknown medical term I had just read was vital to the mystery or if I could just keep going and assume that my ‘Grey’s Anatomy’ and ‘ER’ TV medical ‘training’ was enough to get me through the verbiage.  The good news is that, for the most part, my hours watching Dr Grey and her cronies was enough to get me by.  (Note: I also read this the ‘old fashioned way’ with a paperback so I also didn’t have my Kindle’s dictionary at my fingertips to help me along the way either.)

So, what did I think about this first book in the Toni Day mystery series?  Overall it was a good start and had many things going for it.  There were a lot of plot lines and twists and Toni was an interesting and strong main character who was knowledgeable and spunky.  She definitely held her own and was able to get into enough trouble to keep things flowing fairly well.  Toni was definitely the star of the book and the author used this first book to help the reader really get to know her.  The supporting characters were much more on the sidelines in this book so I’m hoping that I’ll get to know them in the next book.

I did have an issue with the dialogue and it stemmed from the emotions of some of the characters seeming to come out of nowhere — specifically anger and excessive swearing.  I’m not against swearing in a book but I prefer it to not be used needlessly.  For example, Toni referring to a ‘f**king endotracheal tube’ was a little over the top for me and her anger over the tube seemed to come out of nowhere.  This excessive swearing and sudden angry emotional outbursts seemed a little disjointed with who I thought the characters were.  I actually went back and reread a part a couple of times to make sure that I had understood the feeling of the conversation but I still couldn’t understand the reasons for the sudden outburst of anger/swearing.  Unfortunately those episodes did detract from my overall enjoyment of the book. 

Two of the things that this book excels at are amount of action and the twists and turns.  Wow!  There were a few storylines (ranging from the murder to a creepy stalker) as well as red herrings to keep the reader guessing.  While I had an inkling about ‘who dunnit’, it didn’t detract from me enjoying the book. 

Overall, this is a very ambitious first book of a new series.  Dr Munro has created an interesting main character and setting that will ensure many opportunities for Toni to solve crimes.  I was impressed with the detail involved in this first book by the author and while sometimes it did get a little heavy in medical-ese I did enjoy the read.  I’m sure the character development and flow of the dialogue will only improve in future books.

There is already a second book to this series, “Too Much Blood” that Dr Munro has generously sent me to review as well.  I look forward to reading that book soon to see what kind of trouble Toni can get into now. 🙂 

My Rating: 3/5 stars (a solid start to a new series)

Thanks, Laurie, for a thought provoking review. Sorry about the gratuitous swearing, I know it can be off-putting to some people and I suppose I should clean up my language. But with regard to the f-ing endotracheal tube, was it by any chance the one that was down Toni’s throat?

Having one of those down one’s throat while conscious has got to be one of the scariest, most helpless feelings there is. I don’t blame Toni for being angry, and I don’t blame her for wanting to get the f-ing thing out. 

Just saying.

See previous blog

Okay, so in the last blog I thought I hadn’t developed my characters in Too Much Blood because I’d done that in Murder Under the Microscope. But maybe not. As stated in this review, from BookAddict.

Customer Review


Pros and Cons, April 20, 2013



This review is from: Murder under the Microscope (Kindle Edition)

I love medical thriller and initially thought I would love this book. Unfortunately, the further I got into the story, the more certain things detracted from my enjoyment.

I’ll start with the good stuff. Munro has the kind of writing style that draws me right in. I was happy to step into the characters’ world and forget everything else. Being a doctor herself allows Munro to give the medical aspects of the story a realistic feel. The main character is likable. And the plot held my interest, with a few twists many readers won’t see coming.

Now the not so good stuff. While Toni, the main character, is fairly well developed, the rest of the cast serves more as props and they lack personality. I didn’t feel I knew any of the characters aside from Toni.

The other negative for me came with solving the crime. The police are portrayed as pretty much useless, with Toni driving the investigation forward. There are certain things police generally do in a murder investigation, regardless of the size of the town or city, and those things just weren’t done here. This stretched credibility too far for me, making the mystery less enjoyable.

Now I really don’t know what to say.

But perhaps I know better what to write.